Hey Linn! I really like how you take a collaborative approach to the playtesting, and use them, not only as a way to gain information on your own game but to see how others are doing and exchange ideas as well. You also speak on changes made in relation to the time you guys still had to work on your game after the feedback, and it seems to me like you used your feedback well but didn’t let it go to your heads and gave yourselves too much to do without the time to do it. The read is very decisive in how it went, and it’s easy to understand how you used the feedback, Overall it seems like your group took a lot of information from the feedback sessions and really put them to use. If anything, you could have shown some examples on if you had questions etc for the players to answer, and seeing the results of those and how they changed during the different sessions.